Dinner Party Suspense tasty. I pooped out some fanfic while reading. It decays here.
[Fanfiction]
On the drive into the country, a disc change...
Beth: should we pull over for petrol?
* [Yeah, sounds smart](@doodle)
* [No, cheaper further out](@arrival)
@doodle: Beth and Mark have switch off after filling up on gas. Mark, doodling in the passenger seat.
Beth: "can I see?"
Mark: "Almost done."
He puts on some flourishes, as though wind composed him.
Mark: "What do you think?"
He shows me the prescription brand memo pad. In a neat, all caps I steal glaces at the words:
"cosmic woopie cushion"
* Inhale, rising stand into T pose * bring one hand into a fist, the other open palm
* squeeze one hand while letting go with the other
* make whatever noise feels right
a crude möbius is drawn in sweeps from the figures outstretched hand.
For a moment, in his smile, I can feel the edges of him that dissolve into myriad noises I can make out is his. Even still, I don't know exactly when I shifted my attention back onto the road.
/end doodle
@arrival:
What looks like onions and a weathered-looking gnome....
oh man.. the pov switches... the mundanesness of it all until it fucking hits you with the extra creepiness.... and then both endings.... the difference...... just damn... really fucking good shit
really cool and freaky!!! loved it. FYI there seems to be some issue - the audio glitches sometimes and loops only a few seconds, or loops at different lengths. I noticed it in most of the sections.
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Dinner Party Suspense tasty. I pooped out some fanfic while reading. It decays here.
[Fanfiction]
On the drive into the country, a disc change...
Beth: should we pull over for petrol?
* [Yeah, sounds smart](@doodle)
* [No, cheaper further out](@arrival)
@doodle:
Beth and Mark have switch off after filling up on gas. Mark, doodling in the passenger seat.
Beth: "can I see?"
Mark: "Almost done."
He puts on some flourishes, as though wind composed him.
Mark: "What do you think?"
He shows me the prescription brand memo pad. In a neat, all caps I steal glaces at the words:
"cosmic woopie cushion"
* Inhale, rising stand into T pose
* bring one hand into a fist, the other open palm
* squeeze one hand while letting go with the other
* make whatever noise feels right
a crude möbius is drawn in sweeps from the figures outstretched hand.
For a moment, in his smile, I can feel the edges of him that dissolve into myriad noises I can make out is his. Even still, I don't know exactly when I shifted my attention back onto the road.
/end doodle
@arrival:
What looks like onions and a weathered-looking gnome....
oh man.. the pov switches... the mundanesness of it all until it fucking hits you with the extra creepiness.... and then both endings.... the difference...... just damn... really fucking good shit
also... i gotta admit.. that whole "but do i flush so early in the morning?" is so fucking real
this was so awesome!
such an interesting story!
woahhhhh this was so good and freaky! i really loved how much character comes through in the different perspectives, such good voices!
Great sense of place and lovely specific observations, really washed over me
would you fuck your orgone clone
really cool and freaky!!! loved it. FYI there seems to be some issue - the audio glitches sometimes and loops only a few seconds, or loops at different lengths. I noticed it in most of the sections.