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love the rhyming verse structure, good stuff

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Sooooooooo goddam goooooooooooood, extremely good work bard

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I LOVE THIS!!!!!!!!!!!!

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I had to sing this one out loud to myself, so good

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When I was writing it I used Folk Round by Kevin McLeod as a base for the verses, but the chorus didn't fit what I was going for so I did my own rhythm for that.

- Bard

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hell yeah this is so good

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fucking awesome

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amazing epic poem!!! very cool!!

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hell yes!!! so much appreciation for all these delightful rhymes, also love the stylistic changes between the verses and the chorus

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hell yeahhhhhhhh!!!!

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Love the way you presented this tale. :)

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this is so fucking good, as kastel said its great to read aloud and the directions of the transitions are so clever! loved it!

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yesss

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really cool presentation!

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Enjoyed reading this aloud. The rhymes slide off the tongue so well!